Goodbye
+16Mummy mummy,
Please don’t get mad,
I know what i did will make you so sad,
I went to the water even though you said “No”,
The water was fast i tried not to let go,
I was swept under the water,
I needed a breath,
Then daddy was crying and pumping my chest,
I’m sorry daddy i know you tried,
I love you mummy, Love you forever
Goodbye for now, But not Forever…
2 comments about this post
aww that was sooo sad why did she die and why did it have to happened like that???!!
That made the hairs on the back of my neck bristle. Writing from the child’s ‘passed’ perspective was oddly more credible & so much more telling.
If written from experience my heart goes out to you all & thank you for sharing.