The Heart

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My heart is young and free
I wear it so all can see
It battles hard and great
To end up in a fragile state

I think all day and night
To see who is worthy of the fight
As I think who to choose
Only one can win, many will lose

I choose my guy
Cute, funny ‘n’ shy
He seems so perfect
If only i new he wasn’t worth it

Now it’s done and dusted
Its finished and I’m disgusted
To say where back to the start
All over again with my fragile heart

…P.S I am only 13 and this is the first poem I have written I hope it’s good enough.

6 comments about this post

  • Amber says:

    Wow! that is very good i enjoyed reading it, thanks for putting it out here

  • Gene says:

    I’m impressed! at your young age of 13, you are good…keep it up…and requesting your permission to share this, thanks.

  • meegan govender says:

    For your age that’s amazing. wow. Seriously.. I think you have a natural talent. I just had to comment. Keep writing.

  • Angie says:

    Wow! That is beautiful, I enjoyed it! It doesn’t matter how old you are! I’m 15 and you write at my level which is really good. Keep writing 🙂

  • Julie Todd says:

    You have done an amazing job. Keep it up. It boggles my mind to think of what you will be writing as you grow older and have lived longer. Thank you, you are such an encouragement. You have spoken so well with your pen. Keep your heart open let it guide you along the way. God bless you.

  • the drug in me is you says:

    thats amazing keep writtin!!!! 🙂 it make take you somewhere far in life 🙂


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